不得不对楼上的表示佩服,不过我觉得还有有些地方得做些修改。尤其是关于梦的那一段,个人觉得还是不要用过去时的好。
建议楼主把分数给Chrisren,我的翻译只是从他那边改过来的。至于押韵,那更是难题了。
原来不是白就是黑 It comes to me finally that it's either black or white
只不过是天真的以为 Not as naive as I used to believe
(这一句是与上一句连在一起的,用used to be就衔接不上了,naive也有问题,不过我想不到替换的词)
要醉得清醒要无辜的犯罪 Be drunk awake and commit crimes innocently
现实的世界只有灰 There's only darkness in the reality
坚强得太久好疲惫 So long have I been strong, I'm tired
想抱爱的人沉沉的睡 All I want to do is to sleep holding my love in arms
卷来的风暴凶猛里有种美 Ferocious but beautiful is the storm which is assulting me
死了心痛就没感觉 A dead heart can feel no pain
灰色空间我是谁 In the gloomy room I wonder who I am
记不得幸福是什么滋味 No longer memorize what happiness tastes like
无路可退你是谁 With no way backwards I wonder who you are
怎么为我流泪 And why are you crying for me
梦见发着光的草原 There is a luminous grassland in my dreams
一身伤回到很久以前 I go back to the past with wounds all over my body
我选择不恨带着平静走远 With forgiveness I go away peacefully
醒来后夜还是长夜 But the night seems endless after I am awake
紧抱着我流泪Shedding tears while holding me tight
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